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What's up everyone!  It's been a while since I last uploaded something.  Here's another
piece that I had been wanting to do for my friend, :iconrandommode:!  This one features
Jet from my manga series, Lucky's Mart, and Random from Randommode's manga series,
The Pirate Madeline!  It's a totally awesome and fun read!  I definitely recommend you 
guys to give it a read as well as give Random a follow; he's a really cool guy.  

Jet:  Now then, let's get down to business...
Random:  Loosen up a bit, kiddo.  Let's try to have a little fun with this!

Check out the previous work featuring Madeline and Charlotte!
Madeline and Charlotte by RenzoWhitt

Read Lucky's Mart here:
Lucky's Mart Volume 1 Cover by RenzoWhitt

Read The Pirate Madeline here:
The Pirate Madeline: Chapter 1 Cover v.2 by Randommode

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it out here! Commissions Request Policy! (Now With Samples!!!) :D (Big Grin)  There's a
lot of info 
on how the request process works, prices, types of commissions, and
how the payment process will be handled!  

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©Lucky's Mart and all characters within are officially copyrighted with the U.S. government 2013-2015.
All rights are reserved to Lorenzo Whittley.

©Pirate Madeline and all characters within Officially copyrighted with the U.S. government 2009-2015 M. INGENITO
Madeline is copyright© to M.Ingenito
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© 2015 - 2024 RenzoWhitt
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

The composition of the piece is nice and clear. What I recommend is to work in silhouettes. This coming from the animation major, it'll help push the pose more and easy to read. Not all poses you will be able to clear silhouette but you want to attempt to still try. Next, make sure you have a clear line of action where the pose flows through. What fabric are the pants? With the wrinkles, It, feels like it should be breezy. Maybe less wrinkles in some places?

All and all I like, just need to keep trucking and doing what you're doing!